支招小作文(164)I靜態表美國三個州的人口、平均收入、貧困率對比

November 9, 2023雅思小作文系列 | 欄目推送說明分享雅思考試小作文真題范文。每一篇范文都經由專業團隊反復校對，最終外教審查定稿。成功就是日復一日那一點點小小努力的積累。[2023/ 11/ 7] The table displays the proportion of two groups of people, average income and proportion of the poverty population in the US in 2002.【主體段分段】：前2豎列一段（年齡相關）后2豎列一段（經濟狀況相關）【開頭段】The table compares the figure for people aged under 18 and over 65 in Utah, Florida and California, as well as the average income and population in poverty in 2002.【概述段】It is clear thatamong the three states, Utah was the only one where senior citizens outnumbered the under-18s. Californian people had the highest average income,andmore people in Utah lived in poverty than other two states.思路要點：- 只有Utah的65歲以上人口>18歲以下人口- California的average income最高，Utah的貧困率最高【Body 1】Californiahad the largest proportion ofpeople who were younger than 18(30%),followed by the figure inFlorida(20%).Althoughonly15% of the population in Utah were under 18,this statehad the highest percentage ofpeople aged older than 65.Besides, a similar figure in terms of population aged over 65could be found inFlorida and California, with roughly 18%.思路要點：- <18人口：California最高，Florida第二- Utah18歲以下的人口只有15%，但是65以上的人口最高- 剩下2個州的65以上人口 相似【Body 2】It is clear thatthe average income and the figure for population living in povertywere negatively co-related.To be more specific,we can find thatthe average income in Californiaranked the top($22,000), and only 5% of the population in this sate were in financial difficulties.By contrast, the lowest average incomewas found in Utah($18,000), and 11% of the people there were below the official poverty line.思路要點：- average income和貧困率呈現負相關的關系- California：average income最高，貧困率僅為5%- Utah：average income最低，貧困率最高